Post by kittycat16 on Oct 31, 2005 12:54:53 GMT -5
It was a perfectly normal day at kadiac and it as always started at 8:00am in the morning. The boys were waiting outside as the normally did for yumi.
“Hi guys” yumi said happily as she reached them.
“What’s up yumi” odd said as he pounced on her giving her a huge hug.
Ok thought yumi, I’m going to have a broken rib, then again maybe a few broken ribs, as Ulrich and jeremie also pounced on her.
“Hi yumi” they both said. Now someone will say group hug she thought, right on cue odd shouted “group hug!”(A/n cute, isn’t it!) Then they all grabbed her and each other, and squeezed.
“Guys I can’t breathe” yumi said in a struggled breath
“Oops, sorry yumi” they all said. After she had regained control of her breathing she asked “ok, who’s been handing out happy pills?”
“No one has, and what’s wrong with giving best friends hugs?” odd said.
“I……”yumi was rudely interrupted by sissy
“Finished with your bear hugs?”
“Will your friends give you hugs like that, I DON’T THINK SO! And if you went and tried to hug a bear, it would run away from you, so go away sissy” said odd sarcastically. Everybody started laughing. Just at that moment, the bell rang.
“Well, I’ll see you guys at lunch” with that she walked off towards English, while the boys headed to science.
3 hours later
“I’m starved” commented odd as he filled his plate up, then went to their normal table and began shovelling his food down at top speed, and when the others sat down he got up and went for more.
“How much can he eat?” said a voice.
“Ask mr.bottomless- pit yourself and you might find out!” said an agitated Ulrich.
“What’s got you so angry hmmm”yumi asked
“He had extra homework in science” jeremie answered. Just then yumi’s cell phone rang.
“Hello, hi mom. What, why, really,ok, bye mom”
“What’s up yumi?”Asked the boys.
“I have to go back to Japan for three weeks” yumi said sadly.
do you like it?
“Hi guys” yumi said happily as she reached them.
“What’s up yumi” odd said as he pounced on her giving her a huge hug.
Ok thought yumi, I’m going to have a broken rib, then again maybe a few broken ribs, as Ulrich and jeremie also pounced on her.
“Hi yumi” they both said. Now someone will say group hug she thought, right on cue odd shouted “group hug!”(A/n cute, isn’t it!) Then they all grabbed her and each other, and squeezed.
“Guys I can’t breathe” yumi said in a struggled breath
“Oops, sorry yumi” they all said. After she had regained control of her breathing she asked “ok, who’s been handing out happy pills?”
“No one has, and what’s wrong with giving best friends hugs?” odd said.
“I……”yumi was rudely interrupted by sissy
“Finished with your bear hugs?”
“Will your friends give you hugs like that, I DON’T THINK SO! And if you went and tried to hug a bear, it would run away from you, so go away sissy” said odd sarcastically. Everybody started laughing. Just at that moment, the bell rang.
“Well, I’ll see you guys at lunch” with that she walked off towards English, while the boys headed to science.
3 hours later
“I’m starved” commented odd as he filled his plate up, then went to their normal table and began shovelling his food down at top speed, and when the others sat down he got up and went for more.
“How much can he eat?” said a voice.
“Ask mr.bottomless- pit yourself and you might find out!” said an agitated Ulrich.
“What’s got you so angry hmmm”yumi asked
“He had extra homework in science” jeremie answered. Just then yumi’s cell phone rang.
“Hello, hi mom. What, why, really,ok, bye mom”
“What’s up yumi?”Asked the boys.
“I have to go back to Japan for three weeks” yumi said sadly.
do you like it?
Okay, so I liked it, and it was very interesting but I do think you need to work on your capitalization of names and such. Just because it's rather...well 'annoying' is too strong of a word, I don't know what word to use. Let's just say it's good etiquette and get on with it. Another thing I liked was the hugs part - that was awesome! Good job and keep up the great work!